Toyotaro, the talented artist who took over the Dragon Ball Super manga following the legendary Akira Toriyama, has garnered widespread acclaim for his artistic contributions. His illustrations have breathed new life into Goku’s adventures, earning him a dedicated fanbase around the world. Nonetheless, there are critics within the fandom who question Toyotaro’s role as a worthy successor to Toriyama’s iconic vision.
Recently, Kazuhiko Torishima, Toriyama’s esteemed original editor, shared his insights regarding Toyotaro’s work. Although Toyotaro’s drawings capture the dynamic thrill of battle, Torishima noted that there remains an essential element missing that prevents the work from reaching its full potential. His candid feedback is particularly valuable, offering a perspective rooted in years of experience in the manga industry.
Toriyama’s Original Editor Evaluates Toyotaro’s Work
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During the recent Jump Festa 2025 event, Torishima, who has been a major force behind the success of the Dragon Ball franchise and previously Dr. Slump, provided feedback on Toyotaro’s artistic execution in chapter #103 of Dragon Ball Super. This chapter notably features an intense confrontation between Gohan’s new, formidable Beast form and Goku. After scrutinizing Toyotaro’s illustrations, Torishima pointed out that Toyotaro’s pages were lacking in “the most vital cut of all.”Many fans remain perplexed about this comment, with speculation suggesting that it refers to the absence of panels that effectively convey character positioning.
Additionally, some segments of the fandom have theorized that Torishima’s critique may also target the rapid pacing of battles portrayed in the manga, where crucial moments, such as characters preparing for attacks, are often overlooked. Torishima emphasized the importance of incorporating these moments, expressing regret that this detail was missing, which could enhance the overall storytelling. His direct commentary is a testament to the professional respect he holds for Toyotaro, and he voiced his hope that these insights would lead to improvements in future installments.
Torishima’s Role in Dragon Ball’s Success
More Than Just Toriyama’s Editor
Kazuhiko Torishima is a pivotal figure in manga history, with a career spanning from 1976. Before collaborating with Toriyama, he was already making waves in the industry. His association with Toriyama began in 1978 when he recognized Toriyama’s potential through one of his early one-shot submissions for Weekly Shonen Jump. This partnership blossomed into the creation of the iconic Dr. Slump series in 1980.
Torishima was instrumental in ushering the landmark Dragon Ball series into publication. He worked diligently to persuade Shonen Jump executives to greenlight the story that would captivate millions. Even after his tenure as editor ended in 1992, Torishima maintained a close friendship with Toriyama. His guidance was crucial, and without his influence, Goku’s journey might not have unfolded in the same iconic manner.
Torishima’s forthright critique of Toyotaro is likely to motivate the artist as he prepares for the upcoming special one-shot of Dragon Ball Super. While some may view Torishima’s comments as harsh, they are ultimately rooted in a desire for excellence. His candid views, albeit controversial, remain vital to the ongoing legacy of the Dragon Ball franchise.
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